[Hangul Day] Heroic Saver Joshpapa

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“is concentrating” his or her army
In a “neighbour” kingdom

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“Formatio” should be Formation. It happens in all the champions

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“Resources Yield” instead of resource yield

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“Loot” instead of loof

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Champion name Jin Yi, anecdote name Jin Yia

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Incomplete anecdote?

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“Loot proof” instead of “loof proof”

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“quite” big instead of qutie big

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Instead of “you must be wanting”,
it should be “you want”, or “you must be hoping”

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Anecdote
since the very “beginning”

Hu Zhicai or Xi Zhicai?

“appointed as” a marquess

This should be younger brother of Zhang Jiao, not oldest son of Zhang Fei

Unless the same character has 2 different faces and star values

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Most “capable” commanders

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We are not sure about what they are “up” to

but all we want “are” items

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Level 50 skill = Study VII
but level 80 skill = Study II ??

This doesn’t make sense

Technologies that we never “imagined”
and standardizing units and division of “labor”

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“as” you progress “in” the game

defends more and attacks “lesser”
He has been weakened “by” the years

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mostly “consists” of light cavalries

retreat instead of “retreating”
amount of food “required to reach here”

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ult means? Are you trying to write “ultimate”?

“suppress” instead of supress

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Since most of the arts instead of “Since the most of the arts”

…some require more time and “lesser” resources

Mayor: And so you need to plan how to use “resources”

The table in “the” center is for you

Does this count as 4 errors in 1 post?

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Manager instead of “mananger” [At right lower corner]

Should be [Barracks] instead of Barracks]-]

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his halberd “cuts” the throat

choose any method “you” like