[Hangul Day] Apollo Sumolix

Unnecessary message, while forwarding messages.

The correct spelling would be “check the resources your guild has here”


Makes no sense, needs to be rewritten. You can spend your loyalty to get a right to use sacred buildings? spending loyalty is already using the sacred buildings.
Possible change: You can check the buildings and you can spend loyalty to obtain special effects from the sacred buildings.

“Wants to eliminate” “allied”


Sorry, wanna is not a proper word. Correction: who you want to befriend.
Also, neighbouring instead of neighbour

number of trades done yesterday.

Crossbow Quest not Counting